Wah, I say. Wah. I'm not sure that I'm emotionally set up for brothels, slavery, first kisses, first nights, and heartbreaking betrayal all in the same chapter. I have angst whiplash. *sniffs* (This is such a... fast story, if that makes any sense. It has a real sense of movement and beat to it that I love, like the best kind of action movie. *loves*)
(Also, regarding your comment earlier that you're having to keep careful track... does it make you feel any better to know that I have written down the names and pairs of all of the main characters from your and Maderr's and a handful of other writers' stories? With all the nifty crisscrossing you guys do I have to keep track or I wind up wanting to pair up the wrong people - I spent like five minutes thinking about Sigma and the twins before I remembered pretty little jeweller boy. ^_^)
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Date: 2007-01-10 01:36 am (UTC)(Also, regarding your comment earlier that you're having to keep careful track... does it make you feel any better to know that I have written down the names and pairs of all of the main characters from your and Maderr's and a handful of other writers' stories? With all the nifty crisscrossing you guys do I have to keep track or I wind up wanting to pair up the wrong people - I spent like five minutes thinking about Sigma and the twins before I remembered pretty little jeweller boy. ^_^)